Hey Tom - okay, you've got some fun stuff in here... and some stuff I didn't absolutely understand... so ... really not sure about the 'Step-mother being flipped' reference - I don't quite understand the image, but it sounds a bit 'off-colour' in terms of 'the world at large' at the moment. I reckon you could find another simile that doesn't come off as a bit, well, sexist. I also didn't get the bit about the panties...?
'Pipe down all your mother's a liver' ?!
'Thicker than Buck's masculinity...' Maybe just 'thicker than Buck?'
Could you do me favour and send the script to me as a word document? I could do some quick revisions and send it back - it would be faster that way for both of us :)
Hey Tom - okay, you've got some fun stuff in here... and some stuff I didn't absolutely understand... so ... really not sure about the 'Step-mother being flipped' reference - I don't quite understand the image, but it sounds a bit 'off-colour' in terms of 'the world at large' at the moment. I reckon you could find another simile that doesn't come off as a bit, well, sexist. I also didn't get the bit about the panties...?
ReplyDelete'Pipe down all your mother's a liver' ?!
'Thicker than Buck's masculinity...' Maybe just 'thicker than Buck?'
Could you do me favour and send the script to me as a word document? I could do some quick revisions and send it back - it would be faster that way for both of us :)