Hey Tom...while you've still got a bit of time... your 'Art Of' needs to tell the complete story of your project development, so it should go far beyond these provisional drawings. It should certainly include them, but we'd expect to see the finished paintings in there, some details etc. It's a celebration of the 'art' of the project and I'd suggest this current document isn't doing you or your work enough justice. Also - in terms of project branding... you might want to think a little more about your city - Sophronia - perhaps you might consider responding to it in terms of choice of typeface and some additional visual motifs? Short version, I think you could push this aspect of your submission even more so.
Hey Tom...while you've still got a bit of time... your 'Art Of' needs to tell the complete story of your project development, so it should go far beyond these provisional drawings. It should certainly include them, but we'd expect to see the finished paintings in there, some details etc. It's a celebration of the 'art' of the project and I'd suggest this current document isn't doing you or your work enough justice. Also - in terms of project branding... you might want to think a little more about your city - Sophronia - perhaps you might consider responding to it in terms of choice of typeface and some additional visual motifs? Short version, I think you could push this aspect of your submission even more so.
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